Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 1

The first piece of work I'd like to share is the first story I ever uploaded (and what I consider to be my first piece of published work): Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 1. It's hard to believe it's been online for almost two years! It's a twelve chapter story about two men named Jim and Richie who work for a grocery store, but it gets over taken by angry ninja lawyers who send them to the Compton store. They then decide to start an adventure to overthrow them.

The story is incredibly crazy and nonsensical at times. You never quite know what's going to happen next. It's similar in style to Bobobo-Bo Bo-Bobo in that way. For example, in the first chapter, Jim picks up an elephant and throws it at one of the angry ninja lawyers, pulling it from seemingly nowhere. It's written to be funny and catch you off guard, which at times can make the story seem pointless, but it still manages to make its prescense known. The first chapter pretty much sets up the storyline for the later adventures and let's you meet the two heroes, showing how the angry ninja laweyrs take over their store and our heroes taking their stand.

I still remember how it came to be. I was talking to a friend, who also was a writer, about writing a story. I told him I was thinking about writing a story about random guys, making up weird things for them to do, which made him laugh. Every time I told him something else, he would laugh even harder. A short while later, I hurt my back and was stuck at home. Bored, I decided to write the story I had talked about and surprise him with it. I wrote the first chapter in probably a half an hour. After reading it several times, I thought to myself "Why not publish this and see what people think?" So I logged onto Fictionpress and went through the process of uploading it. However, after reading the TOS, I found that several parts of the story violated it. At first, the angry ninja lawyers were the super saiyan angry ninja lawyers and the "company band" was supposed to be Judas Priest, but I had to change them in order to upload it. The story also had a preface, but the preface violated the TOS as well.

Anyways, if you're interested in reading the first chapter, visit: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/1/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster. Thanks again for reading.