Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 12 + Bonus 2

Chapter twelve finally brings to light my original plan for the ending of the series. It deals with the defeat of the final ninja Mumbanou and the result of their plan to overthrow the ninjas.

This chapter explains the random title, which until this chapter was written, was meant only to be a random title that referenced several naming clichés. The super was mainly from the Super Nintendo style of naming all their games "Super _____". Vice President was a random elected official, like a boss in a video game. Village Monster came from the fact that so many games had a small village terrorized by a monster. Special Edition came not because of added content, but because everything comes out with a special edition, which may contain a few extra things usually not worth the extra money you're paying. However, writing this chapter gave me a great idea on how the title should be explained: as a nickname for the final ninja!

After the ending there are two bonus chapters which contain ideas I originally had for the story, but decided not to put them in. The first bonus chapter was based on the idea I came up with while writing chapter eight: killing the heroes off. While I still wanted to kill Ninja Tupac Frog and Mary Berry off, my original ending (which I liked much better) conflicted with killing Jim and Richie off. So, this alternate ending focuses on what the ending would have been like had I killed them both off.

The second bonus ending is an idea I came up with while writing chapter three. It simply shows Richie and Jim paying for the deaths of the ninjas.

To read chapter 12, head to http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/12/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

For Bonus Chapter 1, go to http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/13/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

For Bonus Chapter 2, head to http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/14/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

Thanks for reading.

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