Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 9

Chapter nine in the series, which focuses on Peeman the yellow ninja, introduced a new concept to the series that added to the dramatic feel of the later chapters. For a while, I tried to figure out how the characters could help with Richie and Jim's quest to take Jefferson's back. Jenny obviously became a villain, but what about Ninja Tupac Frog and Mary Berry? Obviously Mary was trying to help and Ninja Tupac Frog was tagging along, but neither had been of much use to the two. So, while I was writing this chapter, the idea of not only killing off the villains but the heroes as well came to light. That way, the characters could help out in a particularly big way and still contribute to the story. The first one to die was Ninja Tupac Frog, who contributed to the idea I talked about in chapter seven's summary: Richie and Jim were not to be the ones to defeat the ninja lawyers.

This chapter also references the generous donation given in chapter four, which turns out to be given by Ninja Tupac Frog. It was an idea I had from the start, but couldn't think of a way to put it in the story.

Also, Kenji and Dojima are from the video game Way of the Samurai, of which I have posted a fanfic for on www.fanfiction.net. The "just a box" is an obvious reference to Metal Gear Solid.

To read it, head on down to http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/9/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

Thank for reading.

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