Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 11

Chapter eleven is where things finally start to come to a close. Mary and Richie head back to Jefferson's to take out Tobal, the purple ninja. Unfortunately, this chapter marks the end of Mary's usefulness and we see Richie take on Tobal alone. This chapter further accentuates Richie's brains over brawn characteristic, which if Jim had been in the same situation, would have resulted in failure.

Although I had planned for Mary to die doing something useful for the two, it didn't end up this way. He was becoming useful all the way up until his death, but died due to his weakness and fear. He did end up becoming invaluable though.

Unfortunately, I semi-broke my earlier plan of having no direct link with the defeat of the Angry Ninja Lawyers. In my eyes, Tobal's defeat was at his own hands, but I admit, can be viewed as a direct result of Richie's doing.

This chapter is a lot less random than the previous ones, mostly due to the serious undertones due to Mary's death and Richie's desperation. But at the same time, it has the same kind of humor that the first ten chapters have, just not as glaringly obvious.

If you'd like to read it, check out http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/11/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

Thanks for reading.

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