Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Super Vice President Village Monster! Special Edition Chapter 7

The hilarious thing about chapter seven is that it was partially written around the same time as chapter six, but due to the split I was pondering, remained unfinished until January 5th, the date that I finished this and wrote the following chapters.

After almost six months of pondering, I decided that this would be the beginning of the end and that from this chapter onward, each chapter would focus on taking out an Angry Ninja Lawyer, up until the final chapter: chapter twelve.

I wanted to make it so that none of the Angry Ninja Lawyers were beaten or killed directly by the actions of Richie and Jim. At the time, I imagined that if Richie and Jim had anything to do with their deaths or incarcerations, any supporters or survivors of the Angry Ninja Lawyers could potentially come back and legally get their revenge. It also added to the hilarity of the story, as each ninja is taken out in a different random way (which very much defines the way the story is written).

You'll also notice that after this chapter, the story starts to take a dramatic turn. This was mainly because I started focusing on the story more than the randomness, which is the reverse of the first few chapters. This makes for a somewhat different feel, but it still has that hilarity and random feel to it. Also, this chapter starts referencing previous chapters jokes, something that continues on into the final chapter and that I thought was a funny addition to the chapters.

To read it, check out http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483440/7/Super_Vice_President_Village_Monster.

Thanks for reading.

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